In this column by Krista Ramsey, we are told the miraculous story of a young couple and their amazing, different family. Ryan Craig and his wife, Megan Annis, decided to adopt Ryan's shy, poorly cared for twin half sisters after his mother passed away.
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The column is very informative, but there was one line that definitely elevated the piece to the next level. "Then the smooth path got rough." This line stands out while reading the column not only because it is a line all to itself and is not part of a paragraph, but also because it is a relatable line that readers can connect to. Everyone inevitably will have a point in their lives where things aren't going like they had planned. This line is also important because it changes the tone of the story from happy to dreadful, and is a gateway into the heart of the story. Because the line is placed by itself it creates suspense and intrigues the reader, making them more likely to keep reading. This line is a great example of a metaphor, comparing life to a path that can be changed and broken along the way. The diction is very simple, but effective, as this article is meant to connect to everyone.
Ms. Ramsey's writing style is very simple, down to earth and relatable. In the article "For Better Vision, Kids Need Time Outdoors" Krista starts her column off by saying,"You see it all the time. Your teenager at the dinner table, waiting for his checkup at the orthodontist’s office, sauntering to his car – continually hunched over his smartphone or iPad." This line is very relatable because we see happening everyday and as a teenager,we hear our parents say this all the time. Again, she doesn't use elevated diction, but her articles are still very well planned out and enjoyable to ready. In her article "Super Bowl QBs Score Points for Great Style" Ramsey adds in a quote that really makes the audience connect to the story. She quotes Russell Wilson's mother saying, “My husband always told the boys if there’s any kind of business situation, wear a suit and wear a tie.” Many families can relate to a story of a child getting advice from an important adult in their life. This quote adds a personal touch to the piece and also shows another side of an important sports figure, such as Russell Wilson. It makes Russell seem more approachable. In the article about Ryan and Megan, Krista adds in this quote from Megan, "We realized we're a lot stronger than we thought, and that you can make it through anything – that's our family motto." This quote also helps the audience connect to the story. Every person goes through a period of hard times and comes out stronger. It's just human nature to fight back and try to make the best with what we have.
If I had the opportunity to ask Ms. Ramsey some questions I would definitely have a list of them. Just a few are: Where do you find your stories? What is the craziest place you have ever had to be to get information for an article? What do you like best about being a reporter? Where did you go to college? How do you make sure all of your articles are relatable?